Author's Note: I wrote this piece as an entry to my journal I have to get my juices flowing. I decided to put it here because I needed something fresh on my blog. The snow Drifting Sliding Across the road In various directions Swirl up And splash your face With a sudden Whack of cold
This is cool! :D I love how you say a "whack of cold" because it's like the cool is hitting you. My only suggestion is too expand it a little :)
ReplyDeleteOh well :) (it was just to get some juices flowing anyways)
ReplyDeleteThanks though I'm glad you like it :D