Thursday, November 15, 2012

Creative Ending

Author's Note: I thought this story would end this way because I think it would be only logical if the purple slime sucked out his soul- the thing that made everyone different from each other. 



Molly peered around the corner to see if what she feared what happened did. Realizing now that of course it would happen, she sadly started to walk home. She dreadfully wished Troy would be his old self. The rocks collided into each other as she kicked them with her feet, bringing up dust. Coughing, she tried to remember if her brother, Kyle, would be home yet.
Meanwhile, at the school, Mr. Mason felt something he hadn't felt in a long time- sorrow. But he couldn't undo what he had done, and he never could. Troy was now taken over by a creative-less alien- they all were. Although Mr. Mason didn't regret one bit about letting that happen to the other kids he had alien-ized, he wished there was something he could do. 

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